A very charming track that lacks more variation in the melody, maybe more layers, but great flow of the drums, one of the better ones here.
Thanks yo. Love the one song I have listened to from you and will listen more when not at work. You have a new fan!
I really liked the sound design at places, but it kinda felt flat after 2 minutes, overally interesting stuff, but I'd rearrange it a bit with some surprising parts (LFO, cutoff and resonance tweaking on the lead perhaps?), with more work this could be 4 stars atleast, the play with the time towards the end is neato.
Hey thanks for the review! yes the end is my bane. honestly i think its because i took a break from the original start date of the piece so when i came back i lost the vibe i was going for. I also think that maybe the phaser on the mid bass could be tweaked to beat as well. again thank you!
Hi Tom! Nice to meet you!
Nice industrial landscape, like a female version of Trent Reznor.
Glad you think so. I never thought of myself as influenced by him, though now that you mention his name, time to check his stuff out~
I'd give this a 5 star if it wasnt for that kinda rushed outro (last notes are too sudden), apart from this the piece works really well imo although orchestrals are not quite my cup of tea, you did a solid job with this one.
Actually instruments sounding simple is ok im my book as long as they blend together which is not always the case here, the main melody/lead is pretty good, but the track never gets "busy" enough, leaving me underwhelmed, and as 5TanLey said the arrangement is just wacky, you got to work on these and youll get there.
Hey, thanks for your review! I get what you are saying and can use it to make my music better. =D
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Damn BPB, back with the dank chiptunes again!
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